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S.Hal0mega.B
02-02-2010, 08:44 AM
Obviously I've changed the title and extracted the previous works for a new one... I'd love to hear all your opinions. I was inspired by the merging of two ideas tinkering around in my end. My mother is dying from something the doctors wont conclude on, and so is mother nature passing too.

Thank you again...



And if I pass if I turn,
Into you when my skin curls into middle age,
Iíll pass to lay my pills into Godís hands,
Iím sure heís been around long enough to know,
For all he sows he shall reap the low,
I will charm him into an overdose,
For taking your time,
Before you could live sublime,
To see me in vain,
Bring this world to an end,


Mother Intoxicant,
Her approval was sought,
Motherís potential pissed on the ecstasy she sought,
Her gathering of false friends occurs endlessly,
Mother Nature Passes,
Mother Nature Passes,

The stronger the heat gets,
The closer they crawl,
The warmer her heart gets,
The close they crawl to,
The endless ouroborus,
Like your healthís rotting aura,
A godly gift to you,
Iíll thank the lord deep in his lair,
Fisting his lungs with cancer flare,
He has given only to you,
A measure of unlimited abuse,
That Iíll take as a muse,
And plunge it to his name,
Then God will wade, sure,

Mother Intoxicant,
Her approval was sought,
Motherís potential pissed on the ecstasy she sought,
Her gathering of false friends occurs endlessly,
Mother Nature Passes,
Mother Nature Passes,

The plight was youth and all itís seduction,
A nothing at the very core,
Her weight was soaring into middle age through selfless awe,
The exit was an aged swine eating the scraps of extraversion,

For every moment she gave selflessly
Mother of ours passes,
Losing inches of weight,
For each time sheís done what is right,
Our Mother passes,
Giving me the justification,
To do unto who does this to you,
A cancer handshake blasť,
Free tickets to pass,



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If you're wondering how to make sense of some of this, the basic story of my mother's life was she was pulled out of school in year 4, she's 57, and has been the most selfless and povety (materialist-wise) stricken person I have known. She has dyslexia which combines with her lack of education to make her life a misery, especially in the way her ex husband and boyfriends have treated her, I grew up living with her rather than my dad, I'm glad I did, but I always wanted to make a heap of money one day so she would not need to worry about bills, food - anything - I just wanted her to get what she deserved - her 'golden years in peace' of some sort. A half life of suffering followed by final years of relaxation, but no...

Not Mechanical
02-02-2010, 11:48 AM
Other thread deleted as requested.

I'm looking forward to reading these new pieces and commenting on them, which I shall do later.

S.Hal0mega.B
03-03-2010, 06:17 AM
Just notching this thread up to the top since I just changed the title, adding two works and removing the former. (AKA reason for message lol as if it isn't obvious)

Funndeath
03-04-2010, 07:46 AM
Very good stuff, sir. Reading it aloud makes it sound even better. Really great imagery in the first one. Maybe you should post a reading of them? They have a good flow.

S.Hal0mega.B
03-04-2010, 09:16 PM
I'll try that for you, thanks funndeath- deeply. I'll do it when i find the time and upload it to youtube, post it in here.

S.Hal0mega.B
03-11-2010, 01:31 AM
Just bumping this thread up again since I added a new song.