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02-05-2010, 02:20 AM
Until the end of me

I found a way to reach you
Or so I thought
Found a door. A key and more
But I had to bend
Into someone else
And the skin
Didnít fit
And the eyes couldnít see
And the words I often spoke
Never spoke the words for me

I found a way to love you
Mistaken, I was then
I thought I saw a
Man stand tall
But you too were in
The bend
And your hands closed in
On me
Your eyes locked
In on me
Your chains
Chained in on me

I found a way to leave you
By walking through the end
Destroying who I was
Removing truths from lies
Unveiled veiled eyes
I finally found
Until the end of me

02-05-2010, 10:08 AM
Very nice. I really like the "chains chained on me" line, nice emphasis.

02-05-2010, 01:18 PM
Thanks. I haven't been able to write for some time now. And I am trying to get back into the swing of things.