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06-24-2010, 02:54 PM
he is the monster with the mouth-cribs
there's nothing inside his ribs
he's a innocence eater
he's a child-ass reaper
the hate he once has sow
will grow even with all the snow
the hate will be cropped
when his power has rooted

he eats hearts for break-fast
every day is his last
but every day a baby heart prolongs
a life that no longer belongs
on this fascist kiln
that dries up and ties up baby skin
with license from the court
to rape it inside out

the reaper will come
when no more hearts he can turn
into one more day to survive
in this earth without a child
he will root
and his hate will be cropped
and he will feed
himself with his own cheat

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06-24-2010, 02:58 PM
I'll cut your throut like a cheap cupon
and the death will finally fall upon
someone that no longer belongs
to lyrics writen by him for his own songs

her music his fake
and his albums will rape
the poor inocent children
that wont understand
the way he feeds his weeds
with his own spoiled cheat

the child is curropted
and innocense has rooted
he controlls the strings
but I'm the one with the wings
I can fly, I get high
and I can listen to the song
I can understand it I am strong

I will see, I will be
I will eat, I will reap
I will stop, something that's wrong
I will stop the singer from singing his wown song

I will stop the wound from getting any deaper
I will reap this child-ass reaper

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06-24-2010, 03:02 PM
you come like a crouch
a injured cockroach
I can't undertand you
like they can't understand me too
your mouth defecate
like my mouth rape
you inside out
but the condoms just sold out

fucking retards work like hell
but they don't get to live well
pseudo-humans you currupt the world
and I'm going to kill you all

I am the god and devil
Inside you I am ill
but outside I can kill

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06-24-2010, 03:05 PM
Great stuff! Please write more.

06-24-2010, 03:06 PM
Your world is a lie
You live like little broken playthings
You're lied to and you like to be
There's no cure for you
You're too adicted to, what isn't true
Your life has no value to us
You're some sort of whore
You sell your life for drugs

You're covered in dirty earth
You can't see the mud
You do what you're told
The world you belong
Is loaned waiting to be se sold

The truth you drink
Every morning you shrink
Your life, what you need
Is sold to whatever they give

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06-24-2010, 03:08 PM
I have like 30 more :P

but I wont post them all here it would be considered like spam or somthing... spamming poems :P

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06-24-2010, 05:28 PM
I liked it, though double check your spelling (or get your browser to do it).

06-24-2010, 08:00 PM
checked, thanks, I hope it's corrected 100% now

06-24-2010, 08:38 PM

07-02-2010, 05:56 PM
Pretty good minus

he's a child-ass reaper

Seems weird, and out of place because it looks funny.

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07-04-2010, 11:07 AM
but I wont post them all here it would be considered like spam or somthing... spamming poems :P

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