View Full Version : I wrote a fucking poem.

08-09-2010, 10:12 PM
Blerg ew. Editing because this shit is old and I don't care for anyone to witness my moment of weakness. Mmkaaay.

Anima XI
08-10-2010, 12:07 AM
Are you ok? =(

08-10-2010, 05:16 PM
Is everything alright, Peaches?

08-10-2010, 06:22 PM
Not last night it wasn't :(

I'm still unsure if things are ok or not.

08-11-2010, 02:40 AM
jeez hun :(
I haven't ever seen you this bad.
maybe I'm not #1 on your list to talk your problems out with, but the ears are here if you need to do some talkin'.

In the mean time,... try and keep your chin up. I know it's rough. Shits gets better, trust me, as a person who's been there before.

08-14-2010, 11:15 AM
What's the matter, Peaches? That really sounds worrying! :(
Is there anything one can do for you to make you feel better?

09-19-2010, 06:24 PM
I really dig the hardcore punk vibe of that, and I'm not being sarcastic. The fact that you entitled it "I wrote a fucking poem", and within only five lines left the readers genuinely distressed ... is brilliant.

09-19-2010, 08:26 PM
In spite the frame of mind that bore it, it made me LOL. I want to put that on a coffee mug.

01-23-2011, 06:26 PM
This is awesome. Poem or whatever, this should be in the compendium of poems of someone. A book filled with poems following an ars poetica and all that and all of a sudden, pamparararam: this.

You've described the feeling perfectly. Besides the less is more and naturalist philosophy and all those big fancy words, you really managed to get a message across and not many people know how to do that. Bravo! :)

Yes, I know I'm 5 months late, but hey, it's a compliment. It counts! :)


02-12-2012, 09:22 PM
I think it's kind of awesome.