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Shangri-LIE
11-08-2010, 05:05 PM
I walked into the mans house.
It smelled like paint, stale booze, and a mixture of all bodily fluids.
The family had requested that his body stay there to decay in his domain
As a tomb here he lived, and never left, and there he shall remain.

I could tell that animals have been in here. Ravaging, scavaging,
boroughing into what they had found. Meat, and nests of old hair,
some niblets, and trinkets from the mans corpse that they had to tear.

Then I saw a twitch, as if he were moving. He was but could it be that
he was really... moving? But as I looked closer, I felt under his skin. That
it was just insects crawling under his ... skin.

Under further examination, and looking into his gray eyes. I saw a little
bit of a twinkle like a cemetary sunrise. As I got a cold chill, I drew back
my fist. THIS MOTHERFUCKER IS A ZOMBIE AND THIS WAS ALL JUST..
ONE..BIG...TRICK

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHh

Necrophilip
11-10-2010, 02:56 AM
I liked this. There's a nice flow. The ending is kind of spoiled with the caps when read, though, and I assume this'd work better performed orally. "I felt under his skin" bothered me, but I guess bothering is aimed at.