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Ignite_Midnight
02-25-2012, 02:42 PM
DISCLAIMER:

This thread will contain many of my works. Rather than post thread after thread, I shall put all my work in one thread to help keep things nice and tidy. All my works are open for review, ananlysis, criticisms, suggestions, etc,etc. I am a full grown adult no sugar coating please.
If one of my works suck don't hesitate to let me know and feel free to point out flaws and errors so that they may be remedied.

My first contribution a piece entitled "Saint Suicide"


"Saint Suicide"

I love the way, the way it hurts
Rub my face in the dirt.
Silhouettes bleed you dry,
to weak to cry.
Crimson rivers set their flow,
Canvas skin marked in deaths glow.
Paint me,
A tragedy.
Set your soul free.

I dub my self Saint Sucide.
Patron Saint, of the despised,
don't act like you haven't tried.
Believe,
You'll recieve
I'll answer your prayer.
Breathe of fresh air.
They call me Saint Suicide.

Saint of the accused
the abused, overused.
bring rest to the tired.
Openly hated, secretly admired.
You can't just wish me away,
a splash of color in a world that bathes in grey.

I dub my self Saint Sucide.
Patron Saint, of the despised,
don't act like you haven't tried.
Believe,
You'll recieve
I'll answer your prayer.
Breathe of fresh air.
They call me Saint Suicide.

I'm going to wake you up,
make you see,
Over flow does my cup.
This is reality.
Don't hate,
What you helped to create.
Im a monster, reflection true.
Of course Im fucked up,
whats wrong with you?

I dub my self Saint Sucide.
Patron Saint, of the despised,
don't act like you haven't tried.
Believe,
You'll recieve
I'll answer your prayer.
Breathe of fresh air.
They call me, they call me, they call me, Saint Suicide.

Ignite_Midnight
02-25-2012, 02:47 PM
Here are a two more:

"I Can't Hear You Scream."

We're talking end game economics.
Play it straight,
and we'll fair crooked.
Forge yourself some thick skin,
I'll pierce it with my wicked grin.
Don't trust the warmth in my eyes.
I'll promise you paradise.
Don't know,
Don't care,
Take me anywhere.
As long as I dream,
I can't hear you scream.
I can't even recongnize my own silohuette.
Oh,
How quickly we forget.
Razorblade kisses,
One hit.
So many misses.
Bare your death mask.
Are your scars up to task?
In my Death glow we will bask.
I'm not yet undone,
(No)
I'm not yet undone.
This game has only begun,
(Yes)
This game has only begun.




"Degenerate"

I'm the roadmap to "know"-where.
You're reflective, Im the glare.
Morbid angels, all they do is stare.
Mid-night train to hell,
I'm the ticket master,
You've yet to pay the fare.
You're not my story to tell.
Instant rise,
Exactly how you fell.
Your scars begin to glisten.
I'll shut my mouth, and you will listen.
Shades of scarlett, speak a crimson tongue.
Show me, who you are.
I am the string you have strung.
Thunder in the distance,
Death throe of a fallen star.
Take a fighters stance,
Are you up to par?
I won't make this easy,
Because, I'm complicated.
Won't tone myself down,
Because your sedated.
I've gone to far.
(I'm out of sight.)
Im the who to your are,
The give to your damn.
Don't you know,
Who I think I am?

*I'll post a few more at a later date.*

Ignite_Midnight
02-25-2012, 05:57 PM
*The following is a compilation of some of my completed works. Enjoy!*


"Ressurection"

Splintered at the base,
another thought to erase.
Catch me in Vertigo,
Poison that kills so slow.
Touch me to be,
I'm not yours to create.
White washed,
You said to clean the slate.
Canvas skin to burn again.
I taste ash,
hope is razor thin.
Death in a flash.
Light that burns,
Lost in its brilliance.
Stomach churns,
You were always one for resilliance.
Caught you in my silohuette,
a taste of pain you will never forget.
I rise from the ruins of my remains.
Complete, and heart felt down to the very last stain.

"3"
3 host to gain
3 knights to stay
3 knot(s) in vein

Secrets set abalaze,
What one wouldn't do to amaze.
Chronic tragedy,
What do you want with me?

Time and again, you spread me thin.
You think you would have learned,
not to trust my grin.
Eagerly your burned,
to feed the darkness within.

3 host to gain
3 knights to stay
3 knot(s) in vein

It's a wonder still,
how you shine so bright.
Even as I move in for the kill.
You hurt for Love, and I for Spite.
Combination so wrong,
What makes it right?

3 host to gain
3 knights to stay
3 knot(s) in vein
I cut away,
Still you stay.
Enduring the scar,
I run,
yet your never far.
It's time I cast off my mask.
Is your heart up to task?


"It's your turn to hurt".

I'm through playing pretend.
Sharpen my claws,
It's my turn to rend.
Burn me asunder,
I fell, there was a sound of thunder.
Your loaded lips are set to kill.
Refuse to die I've to strong a will.
Shot twice with the same bullet,
that chronic pain i'll never forget.

It's your turn to hurt.

I'll teach you the art of pain,
my fingertips are already crimson stained.
You drew blood,
I'm going to make it pour.
There's gonna be a flood.
one of us is gonna be sore.

Its's your turn to hurt.

You said forever,
we lost it in the never.
You broke the skin,
bet you can't do it again.
I fought, you let go.
You tried to make the end quick,
I'll ensure its slow.

Its's your turn to hurt.



"A Death, A Rebirth, & an Apocolypse".

You're tasting firece and sweet,

Toxic candy, my own death treat.

Pistol mouth, always revolving.

Loaded tougue for problem solving.

(Your)Shells have pierced the skin.

Bleeding romance, Something tragic to spin.

Words so auto-matic,

Cover up magic.

Leave not a trail, No not a single clue.

One of us is gonna be dead before this is through.

Better me than you,

Hesitiate, lick your lips, what ya gonna do?

Don't ever get lost in the warmth of my eyes.

Smile as "Bang" you enter paradise.

Cut away all the loose ends.

All my truths, all my lies equally blend.

Fullproof alibi.

Which one of us had to die?

Better you than I.

Better me than you.

Split decison, what oh what to do?

Funeral pyre is set to burn.

I was never your concern.

Thats why the bullet found its mark.

Went out with a Bang, instead of a spark.

Famous last words, never escaped the lips.

Watch with grey filmed eyes, as I inherit your apocolypse.

Ignite_Midnight
03-03-2012, 12:09 PM
EX OH EX OH

XOXOXO

You gotta learn to let go.

XOXOXO

Im not the one out of control.

XOXOXO

I'll burn you slow.

XOXOXO

My secrets you'll never know.

XOXOXO

I'll tease the senses,

Never drop my defenses.

Give you a taste,

Make your heart race.

Then deny you what you crave.

You still play this game, my oh my!

Aren't we brave?

Bullet holes were the heart used to be,

I speak only in tragedy.

Your hurt, my pleasure.

This pain called love, a double edged treasure.

XOXOXO

You gotta learn to let go.

XOXOXO

I'm not the one out of control.

XOXOXO

I'll burn you slow.

XOXOXO

My secrets you'll never know.

XOXOXO

You're so eager to taste my blade.

The art of pain, has never been such common trade.

Crimson hues stain the skin.

Cut, advance, Cut again.

This dance, all passion and grace.

Don't get lost in the rythm,

Lest you and the music come face to face.

XOXOXO

You gotta learn to let go.

XOXOXO

I'm not the one out of control.

XOXOXO

I'll burn you slow.

XOXOXO

My secrets you'll never know.

XOXOXO

I pull you in only to push you away,

still you stay.

My frantic heart,tears you apart,

still you maintain a form.

Why are you so warm?

The closer you get,

The more you'll regret.

XOXOXO

You gotta learn to let go.

XOXOXO

I'm not the one out of control.

XOXOXO

I'll burn you slow.

XOXOXO

Ignite_Midnight
03-03-2012, 12:12 PM
Yet another one of my works.

"Don't Blink"

I'm electric,

Current is sick.

Gotta Move,

Gotta Breathe,

I'm not the one who is naive.

I'm more than involved.

I'm a puzzle left unsolved.

My smile has not overcome its mysteries.

I'll infect ya like a disease.

Do you know what your getting into with me?

I'm not crazy, just out of my mind.

Everything has gotten hazy,

Gonna Unwind.

I'm not your typical,

Off Base hypocritical.

You gotta get in deep.

I'm not the one losing sleep.

My secrets will shatter the ground.

Only the most dangerous around.

Can you handle the heat?

Fire pulses with every heartbeat.

Watch out you just might get burned.

Don't look so concerned.

Your Pity, My pity hasn't earned.

I'm like a time bomb,

tick, tick, ticking away.

So much damage so little to say.

Get the hurt on without delay.

Boom, Boom, Boom it's better that way.

Ignite_Midnight
03-03-2012, 08:33 PM
Rebirth (The beginning)


Can't keep my mind still.
Why does it feel,
like im always movin in for the kill?
My skin is no longer my own.
My own atrocities, I can no longer condone.
Thats why I got to shed this skin.
Regrow my grin.
Push and break untill I evolve.
Old inhibitions begin to dissolve.
Lick my tempters lips.
Estactic brush of fingertips.
Danger, Danger,Danger,
My own reflection is getting stranger.
Fire rekindles anew.
I'm shiny and new.
Don't get lost in my smile,
I've yet to test its potency.
Let me walk this extra mile,
Get myself over this urgency.
I got to intergate,
Seperate,
Mold the old with the new.
Till I'm exactly the same with a different view.

Ignite_Midnight
03-07-2012, 10:00 PM
One of my most recent works.

Note: This piece I have been working on for almost a month, after listening to MM's "No Reflection." I was inspired to carry it on to a form of completion, however this piece is open to criticism and suggestions Seeing that this piece is one of my newest works, I would appreciate suggestions as I feel I can do more with this particular piece.


ALTER-EGO

Regret for a secret, you know we’re not done yet.
Your bullet-hole heart is going to tear me apart.
I’m scorching for a view, poison for a few.
Break me down into syllables; ignite as the midnight bell tolls.
Fire breather, come with me. I've got something you're gonna want to see.
Blow me, shot- gun lips; shock me with your electric fingertips.
I don’t care for the brave, which one of us is safe?
Talk me down before I build myself up.
Dare you sip from this cup?

You call it an alteration, I call it conversation,
Your mouth piece knows not but war.
Peace, that’s what my fist are for.
You want to circumvent, go ahead make a dent.

Alter of the Ego won’t let me go.
Got to reap what I sow.
Outside within the know.
Alter-Ego.
Alter of the Ego won’t let me go.
Alter-Ego.

Riding electric, my one tipped hat trick.
Save the theatrics, one punch for an all -time kick.
Tongues got a wicked bite; sharpen the word it’s time to fight.
I’m not but a silhouette; weave my designs to make you forget.
The light will always reveal that which the darkness does conceal.
Slipped, catatonic they called it appeal.
Shades will be shades but a spade is never just a spade.
Current drawn, you could call me withdrawn, I’ll vanish come dawn.

Don't Ask, I won't tell.
Don't Ask, I won't tell.
Don't Ask, I won't tell.
My privledged tongue is hot to sell.

You call it an alteration, I call it conversation,
Your mouth piece knows not but war.
Peace, that’s what my fist are for.
You want to circumvent, go ahead make a dent.

Alter of the Ego won’t let me go,
Outside within the know.
Alter-Ego.
Alter of the Ego won’t let me go.
Alter-Ego.

Ignite_Midnight
03-17-2012, 04:14 PM
My newest piece to date, already one of my favorites feel free to share your thoughts.



B-U-L-L-E-T

You come at me all eyeliner, and mascara, mouth tasting like cigarettes.
You push and I’ll pull, as long as we don’t regret.
The tables are turning, two hearts are burning.
We’re ashes that still contain a spark,
Now baby don’t you tell me that you’re afraid of the dark.

Fingertips set to electrify, lips set to scorch, eyes are infernos set ablaze.
Work your dark tricks, go ahead ash me out. You can call me a phase.
I’ll call you a harlot in Scarlett, you were anything but read.
Silhouettes to sketch the truth, seal it with a lie baby were talking bullet proof.

Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch your death.
Redraw the line, reshape the spine.
Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch your death.
Footnote in tomorrow, I’ve something of yours.
You Know I never borrow.
Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch your death.


Eye’s so cold to burn the skin, don’t bother to knock, knock, knock,
Because you’ll know I’ll let you in.
Kaleidoscope the sound, hearts lost in the found.
Your temper, my scars will remember.
Got to bleed to heal, my tongue was the oath your lips the seal.


Fingertips set to electrify, lips set to scorch, eyes are infernos set ablaze.
Work your dark ticks, go ahead ash me out. You can call me a phase.
I’ll call you a harlot in Scarlett, you were anything but read.
Silhouettes to sketch the truth, seal it with a lie baby were talking bullet proof.

B-U-L-L-E-T, you got a shot at me.
B-U-L-L-E-T, you got a shot at me.
B-U-L-L-E-T, you got a shot at me.
Aim for the mark, there’s going to be a finder’s fee.

Bang, Bang, Bang, told you I was bullet proof like an alibi.
Don’t look so shell -shocked, you’re so under stocked.
I’ll clip my wings if you promise to fly.
Anything to satisfy, anything to satisfy, and you know you’re going to eat this lie.



Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch your death.
Redraw the line, reshape the spine.
Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch a death.
Footnote in tomorrow, I’ve something of yours.
You Know I never borrow.
Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch your death.


Streamlined and hallow, I got your vitriol if you got the swallow.
Hate me for the minute; I’ll remain unscathed no matter how you spin it.
This isn’t personal; beware this edge is never dull.
This isn’t personal; beware this edge is never dull.

Fingertips set to electrify, lips set to scorch, eyes are infernos set ablaze.
Work your dark tricks, go ahead ash me out. You can call me a phase.
I’ll call you a harlot in Scarlett, you were anything but read.
Silhouettes to sketch the truth, seal it with a lie baby were talking bullet proof.

B-U-L-L-E-T, you got a shot at me.
B-U-L-L-E-T, you got a shot at me.
B-U-L-L-E-T, you got a shot at me.
Aim for the mark, there’s going to be a finder’s fee.


Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch your death.
Redraw the line, reshape the spine.
Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch a death.
Footnote in tomorrow, I’ve something of yours.
You Know I never borrow.
Don’t stop for breath, you’ll catch your death.