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crazybitch
08-27-2012, 06:30 PM
I wept between snow flowers
under aching moonlit hours
for the boy that could pretend
I washed my cold hands
from a dissident and painted cross
and wondered, at the climax
from the surreal craziness
of drunken melodies
before the lows crashed
like undertones, behind
blankets of masked shame
and through the sunglasses
I felt i had a name
I wept between fascitious
argumennts, until killer
through pretentousness
there was the salt to bitter
but whores don't come easy
messianic nerds might see
the wretches comedy
of stereotypical emotive dreams
with sliced stigmatized scheme
if only you could clutch me
crawl to my bedside
and fucking rape me
begging for murder
on the videotape of endlessness
what happens next
whose to say who guessed
if there were more blood
in the cup of my heart
you'd be a part
you'd devour every part
and if seth had a name
I'd stay up on his upside
pretending I knew
all that the neon hides

1984
08-27-2012, 06:42 PM
... Teena? ... Teena? Is that you?

crazybitch
08-27-2012, 06:45 PM
Just a Drive Bye

I drive you crazy
You seem to sink into the sheets, snowless decembers, watered embers.
I waited for you to come home, in endless apathetic delirium,
clutching my biblical joy in slavery;
the queer for somber eyes,
a lash to the heart, that broken lullaby, I hope to never part. About the name,
you say it's true--but half of you is not who you said you were,
you're drunk my alibi,
wondering if she was crowned enough to scream---when you shut down the switch.
That crazy bitch. Brave enough to die dumbed down on doped up amphetamine.

You believed in me, I believe in nothing.
Go pass your ozone, alone. You
don't know what you've stolen, that which cannot be strapped down and replaced-- a face without a face , to be faced by the fisted empire---
a sick twisted dream, a demented liar. I hope to watch
you squirm as I rape all the
blood from my kiss, I wish you more--- than your twisted death wish list. Fucker. I raped
you first, your prodigy was first to list. Your burning tower....that hijacked your enemy...
breathe through lava layers, paste your pain to the wall. I bet you were the death of me.
The death of me. Go
fuck yourself,
emnity of sanity.

crazybitch
08-27-2012, 06:51 PM
Are you my long lost fisted blowtorch?

crazybitch
08-27-2012, 06:57 PM
shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh :P

thatrussianman
08-27-2012, 08:46 PM
"We know who we are, and what we want to say and we don't care who's listening."

AssetReign
08-28-2012, 12:35 PM
^ T.B. is one of the most obsessed, self-absorbed people I've ever come across, so we'll know soon enough if they're one and the same.

ThreeEyedGod
08-28-2012, 01:08 PM
Teena bb, stop hiding from me and confess your love!

I lust for you

AssetReign
08-28-2012, 01:39 PM
^ Like clockwork (orange)

1984
08-28-2012, 01:53 PM
^ T.B. is one of the most obsessed, self-absorbed people I've ever come across, so we'll know soon enough if they're one and the same.

You've actually met her in person? Fuck that. What? At a bar or something?

1984
08-28-2012, 01:53 PM
^ T.B. is one of the most obsessed, self-absorbed people I've ever come across, so we'll know soon enough if they're one and the same.

You've actually met her in person? Fuck that. What? At a bar or something?

AssetReign
08-28-2012, 01:55 PM
You've actually met her in person? Fuck that. What? At a bar or something?

Several times. Not at a bar though.

ThreeEyedGod
08-28-2012, 01:58 PM
Several times. Not at a bar though.
Slip me her digits?!

AssetReign
08-28-2012, 02:02 PM
Slip me her digits?!

Her digits have been places no man should go.

1984
08-28-2012, 05:26 PM
I was hoping for a follow story! Come on, we all love a train wreck. Is she actually that... Retarded? (excuse the lack of a more polite word)

AssetReign
08-28-2012, 05:54 PM
A desperate fanatic who will trample anyone who stands in the way of her mission, which is to get as close to Manson as possible. I watched her almost trip over herself to give a rock rag journalist "her story" at SSMF and listened as she wove the fairytale about "Marilyn Manson and me." She was wearing panty hose over those fringed underpants (whatever they were) and looked ridiculous. Her single-mindedness is frightening up close and personal.

1984
08-28-2012, 07:40 PM
I don't doubt that it is. How boring. Living a life like that, I mean.

Christina
08-29-2012, 09:39 AM
I used to like her, but now, she won't answer my obsessed private messages I write to her, about her, and for her. And she won't acknowledge that we've had sex at several MM shows in the bathrooms. I'm heartbroken. :(

I'm moving on.

ThreeEyedGod
08-29-2012, 10:33 AM
Once you have had a Teena burger, there is NO turning back

AssetReign
08-29-2012, 10:48 AM
I don't doubt that it is. How boring. Living a life like that, I mean.


She hinted at her own special brand of insanity (without realizing it, of course) in one of the Manson stories she posted here when she ended with the comment, "and no cops this time," or something along those lines. Maybe it's just me, but if your "love" has to have the cops remove you, the only place he's your love is in your head.

Christina
08-29-2012, 02:07 PM
HEY! It's called "fighting for what you want!" :P

Shangri-LIE
08-30-2012, 08:54 AM
Loved the writings, however, anyone who has fantasies of being raped or murdered needs real psychological help. That's just my opinon.

AssetReign
08-30-2012, 09:06 AM
^ Exactly. As do people who have fantasies of being the rapist and murderer.

Shangri-LIE
08-30-2012, 09:27 AM
^ Exactly. As do people who have fantasies of being the rapist and murderer.

Here's an example of how things get misinterpreted on the internet, but are you implying that I have fantasies of being a rapist and/or a murderer? O o

AssetReign
08-30-2012, 09:45 AM
Here's an example of how things get misinterpreted on the internet, but are you implying that I have fantasies of being a rapist and/or a murderer? O o

No. I said exactly what I meant. I'm not sure why you would think I know anything about your fantasies.

Shangri-LIE
08-30-2012, 12:13 PM
No. I said exactly what I meant. I'm not sure why you would think I know anything about your fantasies.

Meh, just clarifying. And yes, that's true. *feels weird and eats a peach

MisanthroPope
08-30-2012, 09:48 PM
*feels weird and eats a peach

A Peach that didn't want to be eaten...rapist.

crazybitch
09-01-2012, 03:00 PM
You guys are funny. My poem was part parody, and maybe I should say it's an ode to teenabyrd lol. I have a rape fetish, not the same as actual rape it's just rough sex IMO. That and being touched, being touched is actually the most enjoyable for me. It's better than sex.

crazybitch
09-01-2012, 03:02 PM
abc 123 please don't leave
I will make you my slave
hardcore on the floor
bend over next door neighbor
slave labor is harder
than being a whore
what's it for? sex for sure
but tools are fools
when they skip class
kiss my ass
I speak no espanol
let's partay
take me to a movie
I will video tape
our escapade in my brain
It's so mundane
life's pretty plain
I would fuck Marilyn Manson
again

1984
09-02-2012, 05:46 PM
I'm sorry, but these writings are fucking terrible.

AssetReign
09-02-2012, 06:29 PM
^At least you said "I'm sorry" first. Lulz

MaryYana
09-03-2012, 03:27 AM
It's not teena. Not enough cocksucking and it's not a wall of text.

1984
09-03-2012, 04:09 AM
^ Very observant of you. She really does like to mention the wang going in her mouth a lot more.

MaryYana
09-03-2012, 04:46 AM
^ Very observant of you. She really does like to mention the wang going in her mouth a lot more.

"Oh, dear cockhead! What shalt I do to please thou on this glorious day?"

ThreeEyedGod
09-03-2012, 09:02 AM
yeah, these stories don't make me cum like Teena's.

crazybitch
09-04-2012, 11:49 AM
Oh I'm sorry. These aren't serious writings, just having a little fun.

ThreeEyedGod
09-04-2012, 12:25 PM
There can only be one.

TheTeletubbieFlasher
09-04-2012, 02:39 PM
yeah, these stories don't make me cum like Teena's.

:O

TheTeletubbieFlasher
09-04-2012, 02:40 PM
abc 123 please don't leave
I will make you my slave
hardcore on the floor
bend over next door neighbor
slave labor is harder
than being a whore
what's it for? sex for sure
but tools are fools
when they skip class
kiss my ass
I speak no espanol
let's partay
take me to a movie
I will video tape
our escapade in my brain
It's so mundane
life's pretty plain
I would fuck Marilyn Manson
again

This is pure art!

crazybitch
09-05-2012, 12:27 PM
Why Thank you!

HeartShapedAsses
10-05-2012, 11:21 PM
What an interesting tread, I love lurking on this side of the forum lol! -The stories are interesting and so are the gaggling back and forth by the vocal readers. I notice, most tend to issue out disapproval to these types of fan fictions, however the fact that these treads are so hot and always getting posted in shows some enjoyment in the stories are being had. Whether it is admitted or not, probably in fears of looking like a pervert for the admitting.
So (hint) writers take note of this.

Then again there are probably those who genuinely do dislike it, but come back again for the after story, gaggle about the story. =P

crazybitch
10-30-2012, 12:53 PM
I'm glad you appreciate a diverse form of writing, HeartShaped...I am admittedly not the best writer in town, but I do work hard on improving what I write and trying to appeal to readers of fiction. I just wish I could write like Stephen King or something, and people love my writing. I lack the ability to truly convey a scene with depth. I want to learn to show/not tell, as writers oft say is important. I'm going to write something soon, hoping someone will enjoy it.

AssetReign
10-30-2012, 01:29 PM
You guys are funny. My poem was part parody, and maybe I should say it's an ode to teenabyrd lol.

As we now know, Teena's obsession is no laughing matter and certainly not deserving of homage.

crazybitch
10-30-2012, 01:34 PM
Yes indeed, her obsession is more like an addiction that cannot be stopped. Monster penises attacked her brain and whatnot. I wish I had a dick sometimes.