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Shangri-LIE
10-25-2012, 08:04 PM
We went out. I came home alone. She was covered in leaves. She left me.
I poured a drink and watched her skin sink. She had done the unforgivable.
Leave me? LEAVE ME?

I sat at my desk and burnt off my fingerprints. Stabbed myself with ink and bleed.
I have realized that I am of this breed. Is it O.K.? Why can't people just obey...
me?

Leave me? LEAVE ME?

Break. Conform. Contort around me. Be mine. Eat off of the plate of my mind.
I'll kill you if you don't fuck me forever. I am a man. You are mine. Death is nothingness
and I am everything. So how dare you...

Leave me? LEAVE ME? My dreams came true when you never leaved me.

blue angel
10-25-2012, 09:58 PM
This is cute.

Shangri-LIE
10-26-2012, 06:38 AM
LOL

yuzukelly
10-26-2012, 07:01 AM
This is... something! :D

TH15x15xMYxOMeGA
10-29-2012, 06:53 PM
I love the way the title deceives. Very cool.
I can honestly say I expected someone creating a thread about the good time they had at the VIP "after-party" on the ToE Tour haha.

It really was a good writing though. Nice flow to it, and power.

Shangri-LIE
10-30-2012, 03:20 AM
I love the way the title deceives. Very cool.
I can honestly say I expected someone creating a thread about the good time they had at the VIP "after-party" on the ToE Tour haha.

It really was a good writing though. Nice flow to it, and power.


Considering that I was drunk, not being sincere, and chuckling the entire I wrote it, I'll take that as a compliment. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

crazybitch
10-30-2012, 12:49 PM
Aww man you had me fooled. I thought it was sincere, because I could feel ur pain lol.

Shangri-LIE
10-31-2012, 04:39 AM
Aww man you had me fooled. I thought it was sincere, because I could feel ur pain lol.

If it counts for anything, I used to feel that way back when I cared if someone "ditched" me. :P

kalim123
10-31-2012, 07:04 AM
Sorry but every thread on Poetry & storytelling just makes me cringe.

crazybitch
11-06-2012, 02:23 PM
Acid helps with that.

Shangri-LIE
11-08-2012, 04:41 PM
I aint no druggie drug druggie