Please check out my bands new song. It is just a demo, but I would love to hear some feedback! (no bass or synths yet, but you will get the idea....and our first full length album will be out in a few months!)
Well jesus christ. about 20 views and not a single reply. I don't care if you think if totally fucking sucks. Give me some feedback, fuckers!!!
As I said, it is far from finished. But I think (and hope) it translates well and you will see what I am intending for this song...
Um ... you'll appeal to people who really don't like themselves. Good start though.
...Not really sure what the hell that means. But thanks/go to hell.
Reminds me of a lost Frankenstein Drag Queens track.
I could enjoy everything but the lyrics.
It sounds alright... But with all due respect, you bother me endlessly.
Bother you endlessly....do you mean vocally? Or, please be more specific. I'd like to know what to change prior to the official release.
As a fan of the Frankenstein Drag Queens, I can take that as a compliment. I'm surprised however, with that being said, that you do not like the lyrics. Most of their shit was just silly horror themed lyrics. This song was actually inspired by my girlfriend. Not necessarily about her, but about her likes/interests. I tried to lyrically combine Halloween/spooky themes with themes of a hot drugged out chick.
Think of Type O Negatives Black No. 1 with more drug references and with faster harder hitting music in the likes of the band Dope. That was the goal. To some extent I think we succeeded. I'll be the first to admit it's not perfect. But thank you for your thoughts..
Never mind, you seem better.
Der tod ist ein dandy.
I just listened to your track and thought I'd give my opinion, as you've requested.
I listened halfway and had to stop. The vocals are awful and monotonous, I have the same to say for the lyrical content. I think you should ask yourself why exactly you are aiming for this style because it has been something that has been done to death circa 2000. It really sounds like a amateur carbon copy of your influences.
I'm sorry that this is so negative but a lot of people dance around this kind of thing and try and sugar coat it and when I first started playing music in my teen years I really needed a big slap in the face.
Find YOUR voice and YOUR sound because the reason people aren't reacting to this well is because it is very obvious that this isn't an authentic piece of music. Don't worry about releasing albums. Focus on being an artist and a musician. I'd also recommend that you mess around with the guitar tone because it lacks a lot of flavor - I know it's just a demo but you can still tell whoever is playing is a bedroom guitarist.
Peace man, and good luck! Keep at it!