Sometimes I find if you approach an idea and it doesnt flow cohesively on its own, might be good to be willing to scratch it and start over. Typically when things click, you'll know and it'll make the path more clear. I say abandon the MM vibe and see where it takes you on your own.
reverse icarus the sun's flown too close to us and there's no space to escape consciousness laid agape
So I took your guys advice and tried re-recording the industrial rock song I'm working on with less of a Manson vibe. This isn't the final vocals I'm going to use in the song, just a demo so I can get some feedback, make some changes if necessary, and go from there.
Do you think it sounds better this way than the first version I posted?
It's still making me shit, man. :(