Two new songs

[Illicium]

Here are two new songs which I have been getting really good feedback on so far. The first one is pretty much completed except for a bit of editing:

http://soundcloud.com/abysmaldirge/gothic-rock-song-1

And the second one I have only done a basic demo recording of the vocals for so far and still needs some work:

http://soundcloud.com/abysmaldirge/gothic-rock-song

I do the vocals in both these songs. Any feedback would be appreciated!

[Kollaps]

MM burps Coolio?



To give some positive feedback, the music is sounding noticeably more improved and interesting then the last few posts so good job on that but the vocals are killing everything you are doing man.

[Kollaps]

Dude. The black metal song you have on your soundcloud is really good. Why don't you sing like that instead of trying to sound like a burping Marilyn?! Post that shit on here instead.