The day my dreams came true

[Dv5]

We went out. I came home alone. She was covered in leaves. She left me.
I poured a drink and watched her skin sink. She had done the unforgivable.
Leave me? LEAVE ME?

I sat at my desk and burnt off my fingerprints. Stabbed myself with ink and bleed.
I have realized that I am of this breed. Is it O.K.? Why can't people just obey...
me?

Leave me? LEAVE ME?

Break. Conform. Contort around me. Be mine. Eat off of the plate of my mind.
I'll kill you if you don't fuck me forever. I am a man. You are mine. Death is nothingness
and I am everything. So how dare you...

Leave me? LEAVE ME? My dreams came true when you never leaved me.

[blue angel]

This is cute.

[Dv5]

LOL

[yuzukelly]

This is... something! :D

[TH15x15xMYxOMeGA]

I love the way the title deceives. Very cool.
I can honestly say I expected someone creating a thread about the good time they had at the VIP "after-party" on the ToE Tour haha.

It really was a good writing though. Nice flow to it, and power.

[Dv5]

I love the way the title deceives. Very cool.
I can honestly say I expected someone creating a thread about the good time they had at the VIP "after-party" on the ToE Tour haha.

It really was a good writing though. Nice flow to it, and power.

Considering that I was drunk, not being sincere, and chuckling the entire I wrote it, I'll take that as a compliment. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[crazybitch]

Aww man you had me fooled. I thought it was sincere, because I could feel ur pain lol.

[Dv5]

Aww man you had me fooled. I thought it was sincere, because I could feel ur pain lol.

If it counts for anything, I used to feel that way back when I cared if someone "ditched" me. :P

[kalim123]

Sorry but every thread on Poetry & storytelling just makes me cringe.

[crazybitch]

Acid helps with that.